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If one were to look at the Uzumaki boy, they would see spikey blond hair with bangs that hid aqua eyes from view. They would notice that the usually up-beat teenager was flushed and out of breath. In his hand they would spot an assortment of flowers- Sunflowers mostly- missing half their petals, most likely lost in the mad dash it took him to get to his current  placement.

He must be here to visit Sakura. After all, he would only ever get this worked up over her...Right?


If one were to enter Naruto's mind they would find- in between the many thoughts of ramen- the events of the day and how exactly he got here.

How he went down to team 8's training ground in search of Hinata and her help on a new jutsu.

How he only found Kiba and Shino, who informed him Hinata had been in hospital for two days now.

How he had run straight to the Yamanaka flower shop and grabbed the first bouquet available.   

How he ended up stood in front of Konoha's biggest and only hospital gaping at the hospital sign like... Well, a fish.


If one were to look at the Hyuga heiress, they would see purple locks framing a sculptured face, slumbering peacefully in a hospital bed. They would see cards and get well gifts surrounding her from various comrades, villagers and even one or two family members. Her lavander eyes, now closed, held a kindness one would not expect to find in a Hyuga's eyes.


If one were to enter Hinata's mind- past the thoughts of training and her determination to prove herself- they would find her dreaming of her obvious crush. Someone branded a fool and a failure by the village would be presented in a different light- the light of one who understands and knows the truth behind loneliness.  


If one was Naruto Uzumaki, they would have slowly peeled their eyes from the entrance sign and proceed into the hospital room where Hinata lay. They would have noticed her elegant features, illuminated by the glow of the late morning sun. They would not have realised it as they approached the angelic creature in the bed and brushed a soft, pale cheek with their fingertips.


If one was Hinata Hyuga, they would have awoken abruptly to stare into the blue eyes of Konoha's number one knucklehead ninja. They would not have processed anything further than the fact Naruto was TOO CLOSE. They would have turned a shade of red that rivalled any tomato and promptly fainted.


Well... That wasn't supposed to happen.
More NaruHina love~ :love:
It's only the first chapter and I am already starting to drown in the fluff! :happybounce:

Updates will be slow thanks to exams :nuu: but this wouldn't leave me alone so I had to post it :D

I hope you enjoy it!

~Hazzie-chan

P.S. Repetition is intended and I tried to play about with viewpoints :)
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anninie Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Lov it
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clouds2daydreams Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
i really like where this is going.
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hazza228 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
Thank you :D It is quite an old story though. I hope you like the rest just as much.
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narutoandhinata4life Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
This is really good but I am a little confused did Hinata faint or something
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hazza228 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Thanks!

Yes, she did. I'm sorry if it didn't come across well. The second chapter should clear things up though :D
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tehawsumninja Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha, so far, I love this :iconsmilenarutoplz:
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hazza228 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
Yay :happybounce: I am writing chapter 4 at the moment :D So I hope you still love the next few chapters :D
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tehawsumninja Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes!!! Bring on chapter 4!!!!!
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hazza228 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
Haha :D You''re wish is my command :L I will post ASAP :)
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tehawsumninja Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yesh!!!!
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