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Subtle Things - Chapter Two

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Ok... Waiting was taking way too long. It had been a month and she'd just managed to say hi to him once. That was it. No "how are you?"s or "I love you"s... He really wanted to hear her say that again. He... He loved her. He needed her to know that. He needed the confirmation that she didn't hate him for what he did. He should have answered sooner. Maybe then he wouldn't be in this mess.

Ah well, better late than never... Right?

Either way, Naruto was going to find out.

After finishing his lunch of- you guessed it- ramen, Naruto set off to find Hinata once more; a task that had already taken up the majority of his day.

Wait! Was that-?

It had disappeared round the corner but it was too late. He'd seen the flash of indigo and lavender.

Of course he set off after her. What else was he going to do? He had to catch her before she got anywhere near either the Hyuuga compound or her protective cousin. Naruto had faced Neji's rage before and after three weeks the injuries had sort of healed... Let's just say he wasn't in a hurry to face him again.

There!

All he had to do was cut her off at the next corner and-

"OOF!"

As soon as Naruto had regained his senses, he realised he was facing a certain Hinata Hyuuga, who he had conveniently caged against the floor. Despite the Hyuuga heiress being cherry red and obviously struggling not to faint, Naruto had one less problem as now she could no longer avoid him.

"Hinata! I've been looking everywhere for you."

Well, at least she was focusing on him now...
So... some people asked for me to continue Subtle Things :) and this is what I've gotten so far... (Sorry it's so short! Dx)

But I am already part way through the next chapter which is only separate to make the change of scene clear :meow: It'll be up soon with plenty of NaruHina goodness, I promise! :happybounce:

Thanks to Teeny-chan for beta-ing! :D

Enjoy~ Hazzie-chan
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Katangaroo's avatar
In the last paragraph, could you consider revising the "conveniently caged" part so it is more clear what position everyone is in? I'm not sure from that whether there is a dead end or if they fell funny or if he is dominating over her thus trapping her. Also if they are standing or sitting or leaning would be nice to know.
Basically I'm asking you to describe the imagery better.
Thnx
-Kata ^^