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Ok... Waiting was taking way too long. It had been a month and she'd just managed to say hi to him once. That was it. No "how are you?"s or "I love you"s... He really wanted to hear her say that again. He... He loved her. He needed her to know that. He needed the confirmation that she didn't hate him for what he did. He should have answered sooner. Maybe then he wouldn't be in this mess.
Ah well, better late than never... Right?
Either way, Naruto was going to find out.
After finishing his lunch of- you guessed it- ramen, Naruto set off to find Hinata once more; a task that had already taken up the majority of his day.
Wait! Was that-?
It had disappeared round the corner but it was too late. He'd seen the flash of indigo and lavender.
Of course he set off after her. What else was he going to do? He had to catch her before she got anywhere near either the Hyuuga compound or her protective cousin. Naruto had faced Neji's rage before and after three weeks the injuries had sort of healed... Let's just say he wasn't in a hurry to face him again.
There!
All he had to do was cut her off at the next corner and-
"OOF!"
As soon as Naruto had regained his senses, he realised he was facing a certain Hinata Hyuuga, who he had conveniently caged against the floor. Despite the Hyuuga heiress being cherry red and obviously struggling not to faint, Naruto had one less problem as now she could no longer avoid him.
"Hinata! I've been looking everywhere for you."
Well, at least she was focusing on him now...
Ah well, better late than never... Right?
Either way, Naruto was going to find out.
After finishing his lunch of- you guessed it- ramen, Naruto set off to find Hinata once more; a task that had already taken up the majority of his day.
Wait! Was that-?
It had disappeared round the corner but it was too late. He'd seen the flash of indigo and lavender.
Of course he set off after her. What else was he going to do? He had to catch her before she got anywhere near either the Hyuuga compound or her protective cousin. Naruto had faced Neji's rage before and after three weeks the injuries had sort of healed... Let's just say he wasn't in a hurry to face him again.
There!
All he had to do was cut her off at the next corner and-
"OOF!"
As soon as Naruto had regained his senses, he realised he was facing a certain Hinata Hyuuga, who he had conveniently caged against the floor. Despite the Hyuuga heiress being cherry red and obviously struggling not to faint, Naruto had one less problem as now she could no longer avoid him.
"Hinata! I've been looking everywhere for you."
Well, at least she was focusing on him now...
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You're The Only One Chapter 13
The Final Battle
Naruto backed away while putting his hand on his wound. He doesn't get it, why did Hinata stab him. Then he heard Kabuto laughing from behind him. Naruto turned and growled. "What's so funny?"
Kabuto smiled. "You fool, that is not your Hinata. She's the darkness in her heart, it wasn't very difficult to find though."
Naruto stared back at Hinata. "Hinata?"
Hinata growled and charged at him. "I told you, I'm not Hinata!"
Hinata was on the floor again while the dark Hinata was standing over her. The dark Hinata just huffed. "So, this is the girl that has been holding be in all these years. If you don't put up a good fight,
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You're The Only One chapter 6
The Decision
'HEY KIT, TIME TO GET THE HELL UP!!!'
After hearing that, Naruto screamed and accidentally fell out of bed (again). Naruto stood up off the floor and grunted. "What is this matter with you? What's your excuse this time?"
Kyuubi laughed. 'Hahaha, isn't it obvious? Today is the day that little vixen of yours gets out of the hospital.'
Naruto blushed and was about to tell him not to call Hinata that, when he suddenly looked at the clock. Naruto started to panic. 'Crap! I'm an hour late!' He got dressed as fast as he could and zoomed out the window and jumped from roof to roof.
When he made it to Hinata's room, but Tsunade
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You're The Only One chapter 2
Escaped
She did not know how long she was running, it felt like hours but she had to get away from the man that was behind her. She was running as fast as she could, wishing he would give up already. Her legs were getting weaker every step she took. She could barely breath but she could not stop to take a break, other wise she would collapse.
While concentrating on trying to keep going and breathing at the same time, she suddenly tripped on a tree's root. She struggled to lift her self up, but she was too weak and tired to move. She wanted to cry for help but she knew no one could hear her.
"Come out, come out were ever you are." Her body
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So... some people asked for me to continue Subtle Things and this is what I've gotten so far... (Sorry it's so short! Dx)
But I am already part way through the next chapter which is only separate to make the change of scene clear It'll be up soon with plenty of NaruHina goodness, I promise!
Thanks to Teeny-chan for beta-ing!
Enjoy~ Hazzie-chan
But I am already part way through the next chapter which is only separate to make the change of scene clear It'll be up soon with plenty of NaruHina goodness, I promise!
Thanks to Teeny-chan for beta-ing!
Enjoy~ Hazzie-chan
© 2012 - 2024 hazza228
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In the last paragraph, could you consider revising the "conveniently caged" part so it is more clear what position everyone is in? I'm not sure from that whether there is a dead end or if they fell funny or if he is dominating over her thus trapping her. Also if they are standing or sitting or leaning would be nice to know.
Basically I'm asking you to describe the imagery better.
Thnx
-Kata ^^
Basically I'm asking you to describe the imagery better.
Thnx
-Kata ^^